An increase in atmospheric greenhouse gases made the earth's temperature rise rapidly. Global warming could have several disastrous effects such as climatic changes and a rise in sea levels. The scientists conclude that the earth could probably be about 1 degree centigrade warmer by 2025 and 3 degrees centigrade warmer by 2100.
In order to alleviate this phenomenon, both governmental and personal effort is needed.
Firstly, the populace should make more personal efforts to cut emissions of CO2. There are lots of ways we can achieve this, such as walking more, biking to work, carpooling or using public transit. For this, the government needs to try to inform the public about environmental issues. There are many ways to reduce CO2 emissions in daily life; however most citizens do not know what they can do.
Secondly, more active governmental participation is necessary. The government needs to support companies so they can develop alternative energies. For example, it could consider offering benefits such as tax favors to encourage companies to develop renewable and CO2-free energy. Also, the government needs to actively enlist global cooperation like the Kyoto Protocol to prevent acceleration of global warming. Global warming is not just a certain country's problem, but a global one.
To conclude, in order to cut the CO2 emission rate, the government and people should both put more efforts in their own ways. People should try to live eco-friendly in their daily lives, and the government should encourage people and companies to live green.
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I think my essay is too long.
I should learn how to paraphrase and summerize better than now.
Especailly, your idea about the govenment's role was creative! I totally agree with that our government shold join global cooperation.
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